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Book How to Draw cartoon coming soon by celaoxxx Book How to Draw cartoon coming soon by celaoxxx
coming soon! May 2013

already ensures your book: celaohq@hotmail.com
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I like it and it's clean and simple. It did take me a minute or two to figure out it was a skateboard so maybe better clarity or a different angle would have more impact?

The angle of the dog is okay but he does seem a little flat. I'm not sure if it's his left leg or his tail that seems a little awkward.

Another idea if you don't go with the dog is multiple characters. Cartoons are about creativity so cartoon animals, people, etc. all merging together and bursting off the page is what I think of cartoons. I for one would be interesting in seeing a group shot with dogs, cats, girls, boys, robots, etc. all bursting off the page in a single shot but that might not be what you're going for.

Either way good luck and really looking forward to this!
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Your drawings are delightful, and the tutorials are very informative.

However: if you intend to publish this as a book in english you really ought to have a native english speaker go through all your text and check the grammar for you.

Proper grammar is important if you want to make a serious impression. For instance: the title here should most probably be either "How To Draw A Cartoon" or "How To Draw Cartoons".

Just "How To Draw Cartoon" simply isn't proper language. And first impressions make all the difference.

Will the book be available in other languages as well? Then it is even more important that there is a grammatically correct original text to base translations on.

Best of luck!
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anamikap Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Professional General Artist
Wow good morning to me when did this happen I am late from where can i get this helppp
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LooneyTunerIan Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Oooh... :3

Is this gonna be a PDF book file? :)

I could really use a book like that.
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Dr-Rock077 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
YO QUIERO UNO!!
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SwanLullaby Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow... nice design!
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Precious-Pup Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
How much will cost?
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Emerson-Fialho Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Professional Artist
Estou aguardando ansioso! Diz onde podemos comprá-lo - se for o caso, blz?
Grande abraço!
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fernandogodoi Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Não vejo a hora! :D
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Adaopalmeira Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
Master, all your draws are amazing! I like it!
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Grey-da-Wolf Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awww, luv it :3
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chozh3k Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I would love to pick up one
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